The Life
The life is like a game,
Sometimes you lose
and sometimes you gain ||
The life is like a challenge,
some times you face
and sometimes you left ||
The life is like a train,
once you reach
the right station,
you feel happy and gay¹ ||
¹gay :- happy and excited
- Hena Kausar
Wow! I've no words for this amazing master piece.
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton for your appreciation!
DeleteAmazing lines..
ReplyDeleteSuch a nice poem; a beautiful collection of words piled together with a deep meaning ππ»
ReplyDeleteSo true! The real definition of 'life'. ππ»ππ»
ReplyDeleteI've read various poem of different famous authors but none of them has impressed me as much as yours did. Great work ππ»
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your appreciation! I hope you'd like my other write-ups too.
DeleteI find literature boring... (-_-) but your stuff is developing my interest in it. π
ReplyDeleteEagerly waiting for your next post.
Thanks a lot!
DeleteI can relate with your feelings because my child was also not interested in literature, but now she likes it.☺
good poem
ReplyDeleteA truly flawless poem. ✨
ReplyDeleteThis made my day :))
ReplyDeleteSimple words deep meaning. Best poen ever! Would like to read some short stories as well.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Will do it for sure. But may I know from where you are?
DeleteEast Austin, USA
DeleteYes! I also wan'na read some stories. Thriller can be a good choice XD
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